My pride is like a castle in the sand
Washed away by hope and need and pain.
You left me holding someone else's hand,
And now you stand alone in midnight rain.
I want you back again if you want me;
I'm ready to rebuild what we have lost,
As the owner of a dream swept out to sea
Builds back upon the beach despite the cost.
My love for you is stronger than the waves,
Stronger than the doubts that we may share;
If you will say the word that my heart craves,
I'll find some flowered field and take you there.
And Time will sweep this interlude away;
It will barely be a memory someday.
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hey dat poem was gr8!!
ReplyDeleteur good at writin must say...
some1 seems to b in LOVE...
awesome man!!!
ReplyDeletewat d hell u doin in infy!!!
quit d job.. n start writting!
cheers...
rohan!
hmmm... someone writes huh..
ReplyDeletenice one !!!
no doubt it is a nice piece , but does this poem still holds truth.
ReplyDeleteno doubt it is a nice piece , but does this poem still holds truth.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good work.
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